Á ellos, tú eras riqueza,
Pero yo no vi el valor.
Caminé, ojos abajo,
Dejada de tu, El Amor.
Pero, un hombre me dijo,
“Ven aquí y sal del calor.
Linda, deja tus problemas.
Siempre seré tu curador.”
The only writing I have on this computer at the moment is in Spanish ^,^
After you translated this in English for me, I just want to say how absolutely beautiful it is. There aren't so many words, but they are all very powerful. And I honestly felt a tug at my heartstrings (even though I have no heart, haha).
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, I prefer much more detail. It's hard to imagine the scene, but that makes it much easier to read it and think of yourself in that situation.
Absolutely beautiful in it's simplicity, Sugar.
Nicely done.
Thank you, Lily. It is so short because it was written for my Spanish class and he didn't want poems longer than 8 lines.
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